Overview: A young woman has gone to war through an extra-terrestrial portal, leaving her loved ones behind. Now she’s home, or at least her body is. What is going on?
Story Telling: This is a short story. And it fits quite well into the science-fiction realm, though I would consider it more of a soft version.
Dislikes: The biggest problem is that this story is too short. I had a hard time understanding the differences that the portals caused.
Likes: The emotions of the mother, who we are following, came out very clear. Her anger, hurt, and aggression are understandable, and relatable.
Conclusion: This is an interesting story. I might have enjoyed it more, if I didn’t get so lost easily. Maybe you’ll have better luck.